The descriptions are really nice. You get a sense of something happening. I’m just kinda confused about what happened before the story. There’s a one off line about the galaxy becoming unraveled and that’s sort of it. Wouldn’t hurt to know a bit more – who are those massive ships, why are there no aliens around etc I wanted to leave it as open as possible, since the narrator is not omniscient, but rather molded by Fren’s sparce knowledge, Quad Bike Like Father Like Son Four Wheeler ATV T-Shirt so I didn’t wish to make the whole thing too rich on backstory. Still, if you want it as I imagined, think of it as the collapse of an unified human civilization and authority, as per Foundation or Romans.
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I imagined it as someone seeing a roman legion generations after they left. There’d be stories, and some images that let her recognize it for what it was, but in her mind, that’s what they were, stories of a distant greatness, gone with the sands of time.Quad Bike Like Father Like Son Four Wheeler ATV T-Shirt The ships are human in nature, as is she. As for why there are no aliens around, I was thinking of it as a very, VERY big galaxy, with not that many species. Without central authority, distant travels would become too, a thing of the past, with trade being a more localized thing, or possessing an endless number of intermediaries.
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Also, English’s not my mother language, so I may have failed to convey proper meaning here and there. Feel free to ask away anything you want me to go on into detail. Well, if you want more detail on that, I thought of the vessel as a prototype built during the last days of central authority, a technology test-bed that aliens unsuccessfully tried to capture. Quad Bike Like Father Like Son Four Wheeler ATV T-Shirt Dying, and in a planet already no longer under their control, the pilot decided to keep the vessel hidden and dormant until a friendly ship would enter the system, one day. That plan went down when Fren entered the ship of course