So, do have respect for biological life or not? It seems like they appreciated gardening at least. Or, is this a fake out? Plus, if they do appreciate biological life please tell me they took over ‘domestic animals’ from the humans. Complete with domesticated Zoo animalsOne of the ideas I have for this story will show how they think about biological life. So I don’t want to spoil it now Nice start. A few spelling errors, I’M OFF TODAY IT’S LABOR DAY shirt but nothing major, and your grammar was not bad either. Better than a lot of those with English as their first, and only, language. Look forwards to seeing more.
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Thank you. I am happy, that there are no major mistakes and that you liked it. I am hoping to start writing the second chapter this weekend. But i don’t know if i can finish it by monday. But getting this much positive feedback motivates me a lot. I’M OFF TODAY IT’S LABOR DAY shirt Your English is fine! Your story is really great. I’m REALLY liking where this could lead and thank you! I love the whole implication of that last scene. Like “See, if we wanted to kill you we could have done so easily. But we wanna be friends, because friends are nice”English is a bit clunky, but story’s still good!
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Only big thing that through me off is “Do you expected company” I’d recommend changing it to either “Were you expecting company” or “Are you expecting company”. “Expected” is past tense i.e. “I expected things to go this way” The expecting is in the past. But here its in the present so it should be expecting. “Do” also doesn’t make sense here but it’s a bit harder for me to put my finger on it to explain specifically why.I’M OFF TODAY IT’S LABOR DAY shirt “Are” is the word that fits better, with “were” being the past tense version, so use either depending on what feels better to you. Both work here. Just getting started with this series. Enjoying it so far.