Thanks, Spook! Ambience is definitely something I’m consciously trying to work on in the story, so I’m glad it’s working for you.Well now, you killed his partner and best buddy.Grateful Dead Aquatic T-Shirt Now he’s got a hand cannon and the motivation to use it. Kiss your rectal orifice goodbye Squidward.I love the ambience and feel of your story, not to mention the plot and setting are super interesting. Overall amazing work this is wonderful
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I’m enjoying the genre being so different to most stuff on HFY. Perfect to stick on a jazz playlist and a rain sounds loop to read it to. As everyone mentioned great ambience and great writing. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I cant think of anything to critique. John is gonna smoke some fools. The end of this where he gives the girl Grateful Dead Aquatic T-Shirt the money is spot on as a symptom of someone who believes they’re about to die. It happens quite commonly with suicidal people.
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I could probably write a lot more, and a lot faster, if I gave up my day job, haha. Pesky bills to pay, and a wife and dog who expect to eat. And thank you to all the readers who have kept me motivated.Grateful Dead Aquatic T-Shirt It’s not always been easy, but you guys made it fun It would most likely be less fun if I was to grind this, filling my free moments with imaginary aliens is enough.. Honestly, most of the storys in this sub, i have read, i liked better than his